JOURNAL # 20: Read over your peers’ essays to make sure there is an introduction, identify the thesis, and be sure each paragraph has a topic sentence. Has the writer carefully cited and integrated the sources they are weaving into the paper? JOURNAL # 20: Save and post ALL of your peer review for paper 3—2-3 marginal comments and feedback letter. This will be vital to include in your portfolio for evaluation. Copy and paste the address of your PEER REVIEW page and make sure the PR of your peers is labeled clearly.
JOURNAL # 18: Read and annotate Michael Pollan’s “Out of the Kitchen, Onto the Couch” For JOURNAL #18, identify 3 passages you think might be interesting to work with in the context of Project # 3. For each passage, identify the page and para, and then offer 75 or so words on why you think the passage might have potential.
JOURNAL # 17 on revision: What did you do? What did you focus on? How was it different than the last time you revised your work after peer review? What have you learned about your writing process?
In motion: JOURNAL # 16: Use this time to create a clear itinerary of things you will be attending to in revision—something to the tune of 200-300 words.
